tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4316520203162903419.post7536870198191579819..comments2023-11-12T10:26:37.670-05:00Comments on Michael Haynes - Science Fiction & Fantasy Writer: "My Name is Imago Montoya..." (2nd WriteCampaign Challenge)Michael Hayneshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07653617216453974106noreply@blogger.comBlogger90125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4316520203162903419.post-76362451942766989132011-10-12T23:32:39.890-04:002011-10-12T23:32:39.890-04:00@jessica, Thanks for your comment. I'm glad yo...@jessica, Thanks for your comment. I'm glad you enjoyed it so much!Michael Hayneshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07653617216453974106noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4316520203162903419.post-65291948129614529602011-10-12T17:26:02.674-04:002011-10-12T17:26:02.674-04:00Very cute! The title grabbed me right away, what a...Very cute! The title grabbed me right away, what a fabulous way to twist a classic line. And I love the way the title segues right into the story. Brilliant!<br /><br />jessica aspen # 174Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4316520203162903419.post-12421169020376098202011-10-07T15:49:37.032-04:002011-10-07T15:49:37.032-04:00Hello, Avery and Wild magnolia and Karen,
Thank y...Hello, Avery and Wild magnolia and Karen,<br /><br />Thank you for your comments! I plan to stop in and visit more of the other stories this weekend.Michael Hayneshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07653617216453974106noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4316520203162903419.post-31895418085409535522011-10-06T20:54:04.017-04:002011-10-06T20:54:04.017-04:00This is a wonderful authentic piece. It read very ...This is a wonderful authentic piece. It read very smoothly. Thank you for that.<br /><br />#189Karen deBlieckhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11833882790709316409noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4316520203162903419.post-66800880958399778742011-10-04T21:41:24.024-04:002011-10-04T21:41:24.024-04:00Real life better than fiction? Believable story. ...Real life better than fiction? Believable story. Great ease with words.<br /><br />Good job.<br /><br />#188the wild magnoliahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14355836751549469688noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4316520203162903419.post-53399089983606395202011-10-04T16:53:12.475-04:002011-10-04T16:53:12.475-04:00Great scene and such a creative use of the words. ...Great scene and such a creative use of the words. The title made me smile right away and the rest didn't disappoint. Nicely done. :)Avery Marshhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15615057600393412922noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4316520203162903419.post-42487933857733054192011-10-04T09:26:50.528-04:002011-10-04T09:26:50.528-04:00Thanks for all of the recent comments!
@Paula, I ...Thanks for all of the recent comments!<br /><br />@Paula, I see you just made it in under the wire! I'm glad that you liked my story.Michael Hayneshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07653617216453974106noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4316520203162903419.post-91599844480975949092011-10-04T00:13:15.881-04:002011-10-04T00:13:15.881-04:00Number 192 here. Your title drew me in at once -- ...Number 192 here. Your title drew me in at once -- I scanned the titles and yours is the first I read -- and like everyone else I loved the family scene. Nicely done!PaulaSJwriterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16491509373593077949noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4316520203162903419.post-39180571228491596642011-10-03T07:05:12.511-04:002011-10-03T07:05:12.511-04:00Very fun story! Great use the required words and ...Very fun story! Great use the required words and great word picture.Kris A. NewManhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15397075484880267144noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4316520203162903419.post-72994969754984567062011-10-02T23:39:50.308-04:002011-10-02T23:39:50.308-04:00I love the Princess Bride reference AND the ref. t...I love the Princess Bride reference AND the ref. to Lacuna Coil. Woot!Trishahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16927558937796802496noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4316520203162903419.post-9462163990785462982011-09-30T16:39:01.037-04:002011-09-30T16:39:01.037-04:00Great job on this and one of my favorite all time ...Great job on this and one of my favorite all time lines mimicked in the title!Brindahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09809660700359597836noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4316520203162903419.post-15209229760098590422011-09-30T13:05:08.719-04:002011-09-30T13:05:08.719-04:00Wonderful! Great choices for the required words.
...Wonderful! Great choices for the required words.<br /><br />And also grounded in reality, which is nice.Ronald L. Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03649046677631873728noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4316520203162903419.post-49531794968308423572011-09-29T11:06:04.905-04:002011-09-29T11:06:04.905-04:00Lovely story from the writer's point of view!
...Lovely story from the writer's point of view!<br /><br />-----<br />Join me at the <a href="http://amloki.blogspot.com/p/sign-up-for-rule-of-three-blogfest.html" rel="nofollow">Rule of Three Writers' Blogfest!</a>Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04283371140346602856noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4316520203162903419.post-19569899891400999112011-09-28T22:28:35.890-04:002011-09-28T22:28:35.890-04:00My kind of story. Family friendly, imaginative, cl...My kind of story. Family friendly, imaginative, clever use of the words, funny, and so believable.<br />Ah, memories. All those stories I told, and now writing them. Unbelievable.Sher A. Harthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03067955594103356768noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4316520203162903419.post-54204394822658124892011-09-28T20:46:17.323-04:002011-09-28T20:46:17.323-04:00Great story. I especially like rejecting "osc...Great story. I especially like rejecting "oscitate." Well done!Kurt Hartwighttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12857036723957923656noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4316520203162903419.post-18185223218831658682011-09-28T20:37:41.811-04:002011-09-28T20:37:41.811-04:00@Michelle, it can definitely be a challenge!
@Den...@Michelle, it can definitely be a challenge!<br /><br />@Deniz, I believe they're sort of a hard-rock/metal band, but I'm not certain.<br /><br />@Angela, thank you!<br /><br />@Raelyn, ummm.... I plead the 5th! :)Michael Hayneshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07653617216453974106noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4316520203162903419.post-66645692135533551002011-09-28T18:14:57.253-04:002011-09-28T18:14:57.253-04:00Brilliant. Love the kids running around misquoting...Brilliant. Love the kids running around misquoting the Princess Bride while trying to write...were you peeking in my window?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4316520203162903419.post-20273229750378554552011-09-28T17:35:50.963-04:002011-09-28T17:35:50.963-04:00This is such a sweet and creative story. Great use...This is such a sweet and creative story. Great use of all required words :-) You got my vote! Good luck.Author A.O. Pearthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09522726537375775560noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4316520203162903419.post-24769411329467985672011-09-28T11:35:27.081-04:002011-09-28T11:35:27.081-04:00Great stuff! Love the ways you found to weave the ...Great stuff! Love the ways you found to weave the words in. Wonder what that band sounds like?Deniz Bevanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17134553551048836979noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4316520203162903419.post-35466234272051450242011-09-27T23:42:49.584-04:002011-09-27T23:42:49.584-04:00Great take on the challenge! Totally describes my ...Great take on the challenge! Totally describes my life when I try to write with my kids awake. It usually ends up with me not writing.Michelle Merrillhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00040685503147648297noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4316520203162903419.post-43442571364165789372011-09-27T20:56:07.571-04:002011-09-27T20:56:07.571-04:00Thanks for the recent comments, everyone! I am gla...Thanks for the recent comments, everyone! I am glad that you enjoyed the story. I need to get busy catching up with everyone else's!Michael Hayneshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07653617216453974106noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4316520203162903419.post-70396433080038259892011-09-27T20:04:33.819-04:002011-09-27T20:04:33.819-04:00I was wondering when someone was going to use Laun...I was wondering when someone was going to use Launa Coil :D I love this little slice of life stories. Nice work.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08774347493321711881noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4316520203162903419.post-56093897145631778892011-09-27T15:16:03.773-04:002011-09-27T15:16:03.773-04:00Imago Montoya was brilliant. The rest was pretty ...Imago Montoya was brilliant. The rest was pretty awesome too. Easy to relate to. You even managed to work in those crazy words without them seeming obvious. Bravo Michael!Sarahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00063058173619213791noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4316520203162903419.post-14276174161524743682011-09-27T09:37:00.180-04:002011-09-27T09:37:00.180-04:00I loved it! Makes me look forward to having my ow...I loved it! Makes me look forward to having my own rug-rat beta readers :)Scott Stillwellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05517425280708658801noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4316520203162903419.post-33616430097381458852011-09-27T07:48:56.551-04:002011-09-27T07:48:56.551-04:00I love The Princess Bride. Imago Montoya - so cle...I love The Princess Bride. Imago Montoya - so clever! It's not being a writer with children, is it?Theresa Milsteinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03477761307315565259noreply@blogger.com